May 7, 2016

Loose Words

And when the words on the page start fitting in together
You let your stray fingers
Comb through the tangled threads
Of meanings and memories
And voices
Condensed in space and time
Within the curves and confines
Of simple, over-used words
And you breathe in the life that was
When you said that word out loud
The last, the very last time.

You shrink back into your old self
And look at your old life
With new eyes
And with hands, that still tremble
At every pull of needle
Its silver length cutting through the crimson abyss
And stitching cliffs back into shape
You let loose words to fill the air once again.


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29 comments:

  1. Old memories can sometimes sneak up at unusual periods, revisiting a moment and space. A delightful piece to read, nice weekend!

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    1. The past is never too far behind. Thanks for stopping by!

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  2. Gorgeous. I felt this one in my heart.

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    1. Thanks, Jennifer. Glad to know you liked it. :)

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  3. I was just feeling them few days back ! It was a different emotion altogether.

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    1. Thanks for stopping by! Would love to know about about this 'different emotion'. :)

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  4. This is a really beautiful piece of writing! Great expression of emotion.

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  5. Such feeling and depth in your verse Preeti.. beautifully done :)

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. Thanks, Sanaa. Glad to know you liked it. :)

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  6. What a wonderful exploration of both words and the process of writing - and being

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    1. That, and the backstory as well. There is always something that triggers the writing process, don't you think?

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  7. What I really felt was that need of telling the same in new words... so important in life and when writing... we do fall back on the well-known so often I think

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    1. I agree. I guess, we need something to fall back on, at times.

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  8. When you said that word out loud
    The last, the very last time.

    - nicely done!

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  9. We all have so much to say the secret is to capture the readers heart.

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    1. Maybe if the reader can find his/her own self in our words, the mission is accomplished.

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  10. Wow, I so relate to this. How we weave those old memories onto the page then sit back, stunned, to look at our lives with new eyes. Just so exactly right!

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  11. I like the idea of 'stitching cliffs back into shape'. And yes, in the end we must resort to words again.

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    1. There are deep crevices and cracks in our soul that we must somehow, stitch back up.

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  12. I can relate to that first few lines. Writing is like combing through memories and freeing a voice that felt trapped. Well written. :)

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    1. Yes, exactly. We dig in and always come back to the surface with something more than what we expected to find.

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  13. "And you breathe in the life that was
    When you said that word out loud
    The last, the very last time."

    Wow! the imagery of the loose fingers, words and threads really works for me as poetry/memory. I see myself trying to bead something in the present that re-animates the past.

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    1. I guess, we tend to work with memories that way. Mostly because they remain static, unchanged, immune to the influence of time (to an extent).

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  14. I feel so blessed reading this....so easy to relate, Preeti!Loose words are our feelings...inspire us to recover! Nicely done!

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    1. Thanks, Panchali! I'm glad that you liked reading this. :)

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  15. This is such a beautiful poem I couldn't help but write my own: www.deviantwriter2.blogspot.com/2016/05/photo-mosaic.html

    Thank you for the inspiration.

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