January 22, 2015

Mornings

Quintessential
quite essential
pure-bred essence
disjunct
defunct
forlorn
unsung
dead-beat deities
parlor trick miracles
wordless blessings
coherent curses
And silence
And light
And serotonin
And dopamine
And you





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40 comments:

  1. SuyashJJanuary 22, 2015 at 4:01 PM

    love the use of serotonin and dopamine

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  2. brudbergJanuary 22, 2015 at 6:27 PM

    at the end it comes down to the chemicals...

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  3. dsJanuary 22, 2015 at 9:23 PM

    Chemistry...

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  4. Tess KincaidJanuary 23, 2015 at 4:14 AM

    Hip savvy sexy

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  5. BerowneJanuary 23, 2015 at 9:30 PM

    Quite intriguing; nicely done.

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  6. GailJanuary 24, 2015 at 12:12 AM

    I like this.

    Thanks for stopping in to visit.

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  7. Maude LynnJanuary 24, 2015 at 3:40 AM

    Love this!

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  8. HardiJanuary 25, 2015 at 12:58 AM

    The use of each and every word is perfect :)

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  9. Brian MillerJanuary 25, 2015 at 11:12 PM

    ha. fun flow to this...near alike words...
    def a beat rhythm to the cascade...i feel a bit like
    dancing...

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  10. UnknownJanuary 26, 2015 at 12:13 AM

    humming along and popping my melatonin...
    great words banging against the edges of the page

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  11. Gillena CoxJanuary 26, 2015 at 12:20 AM

    luv it the word play and its intrinsic meanings

    have a good Sunday

    much love...

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  12. NataĊĦekJanuary 26, 2015 at 12:38 AM

    lovely :)

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  13. MaryJanuary 26, 2015 at 1:39 AM

    Yes, you have captured morning well. Enjoyed the flow of words.

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  14. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 26, 2015 at 2:29 AM

    Sounds like you have wonderful mornings! Yay! I loved this poem.

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  15. totomaiJanuary 26, 2015 at 2:47 PM

    would love to wake up with this kind of morning :)

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  16. SusanJanuary 26, 2015 at 4:12 PM

    The meter--and the chemistry--brings them closer and closer. Cannot help but be drawn in. I'm a believer.

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  17. kelvin s.m.January 26, 2015 at 6:49 PM

    Very fascinating like a kind of morning i'd like to wake up to. Smiles.


    - ksm

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  18. Brother OllieJanuary 26, 2015 at 7:24 PM

    skilled word play!

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  19. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJanuary 27, 2015 at 11:57 AM

    (Smile). That last line just makes it!

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    1. Preeti S.January 27, 2015 at 11:25 PM

      Glad that it made you smile. Thanks for reading. :)

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  20. Gen Giggles January 28, 2015 at 5:47 AM

    A single person can truly make the morning and the whole day. Well written.

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